The Gaze (alternative new draft)

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We all look like death.
First Date breaks through skin,
cracking up and coughing,
checking everything
when checking's all there is.
We only see what's there
and honeyed souls reside
in pavement cracks.
By all means weep,
create a scene,
but that, red eyes,
is that.


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